Great question! Good luck on your portfolio! I’d be happy to take a short piece once I finish looking at the other two pieces I have waiting on me.
Because I’m incredibly unobservant, I don’t really notice much who actually critiques writing, but looking at some of the blogs I recently followed, I found out that a few seem like they’d be open to looking at your stuff.
aquestionofcharacter
aliceswritingtips
writingwordsoup
thewritingrealm
writingtipsandtricks
And here are some great ones I found on a list made by createandnarrate:
http://createandnarrate.tumblr.com/recomendedblogs
RECOMENDED BLOGS
Writing Help
Literature and Books
I definitely follow some of these already, and I really recommend all of them.
This isn’t to say that I don’t follow a bunch of great writing blogs! These are just ones that are recommended and offer to help people with a variety of things related to writing.
Before you message any of them, be sure to check their ask policies and FAQs.
Above all, as writers, we should aim to be courteous and considerate of other people. If they don’t critique works, then that’s their personal business, and you have to respect that. 🙂 (I’m not saying you wouldn’t–just a general note/reminder to all of us!)
If anyone sees this and wants to help, please do shoot her a message. <3
Best of luck! I hope this helps! 😀