“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

azaxxiie said: Why not get rid of “he was positive that” as well I think Yes! Right on! Dying was the easiest decision he’d ever made. You could even put the name of the character in, like this: Dying was… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

azaxxiie said: Why not get rid of “he was positive that” as well I think Yes! Right on! Dying was the easiest decision he’d ever made. You could even put the name of the character in, like this: Dying was… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

I like your title! I’m on the fence about your line. On one hand, I really do like it. On another, it seems like it might be a cop-out. It really depends on the rest of the story as to… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

I like your title! I’m on the fence about your line. On one hand, I really do like it. On another, it seems like it might be a cop-out. It really depends on the rest of the story as to… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.