“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

raconteur-shenanigans: writeinspiration: azaxxiie said: Why not get rid of “he was positive that” as well I think Yes! Right on! Dying was the easiest decision he’d ever made. You could even put the name of the character in, like this:… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

raconteur-shenanigans: writeinspiration: azaxxiie said: Why not get rid of “he was positive that” as well I think Yes! Right on! Dying was the easiest decision he’d ever made. You could even put the name of the character in, like this:… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

azaxxiie said: Why not get rid of “he was positive that” as well I think Yes! Right on! Dying was the easiest decision he’d ever made. You could even put the name of the character in, like this: Dying was… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

azaxxiie said: Why not get rid of “he was positive that” as well I think Yes! Right on! Dying was the easiest decision he’d ever made. You could even put the name of the character in, like this: Dying was… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

I like your title! I’m on the fence about your line. On one hand, I really do like it. On another, it seems like it might be a cop-out. It really depends on the rest of the story as to… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

I like your title! I’m on the fence about your line. On one hand, I really do like it. On another, it seems like it might be a cop-out. It really depends on the rest of the story as to… Read more“Dying had to have been the easiest decision he had ever made.” – Chapter One, Line One: Death Rattle.

I was wondering if you also provide just general support for writers? Because I think it would be awesome if here shortly you accepted, like, everyone’s first lines (or maybe a small excerpt) from their project jst so it’s out there in the world and people are looking at it? I don’t know about other people but to me it’s a completely different feeling soloing such a big project alone that only my eyes can see. It feels good just to put a little out there in the world and let others see. :D

I would love to do that! I’ve got a couple of requests that I’m looking over currently, but I would be more than happy to take a look at things like that. 🙂 A first line can be critical to… Read moreI was wondering if you also provide just general support for writers? Because I think it would be awesome if here shortly you accepted, like, everyone’s first lines (or maybe a small excerpt) from their project jst so it’s out there in the world and people are looking at it? I don’t know about other people but to me it’s a completely different feeling soloing such a big project alone that only my eyes can see. It feels good just to put a little out there in the world and let others see. 😀

I was wondering if you also provide just general support for writers? Because I think it would be awesome if here shortly you accepted, like, everyone’s first lines (or maybe a small excerpt) from their project jst so it’s out there in the world and people are looking at it? I don’t know about other people but to me it’s a completely different feeling soloing such a big project alone that only my eyes can see. It feels good just to put a little out there in the world and let others see. :D

I would love to do that! I’ve got a couple of requests that I’m looking over currently, but I would be more than happy to take a look at things like that. 🙂 A first line can be critical to… Read moreI was wondering if you also provide just general support for writers? Because I think it would be awesome if here shortly you accepted, like, everyone’s first lines (or maybe a small excerpt) from their project jst so it’s out there in the world and people are looking at it? I don’t know about other people but to me it’s a completely different feeling soloing such a big project alone that only my eyes can see. It feels good just to put a little out there in the world and let others see. 😀